Can anyone help me write a conclusion on the pros of adoption?
Find answers to your legal question.
Can anyone help me write a conclusion on the pros of adoption?
|
By adopting a child, it will help replenish a child’s life , as well as provide a child for a couple who are unable to produce offspring. Adoption cannot only do that, but can also cut down on the world’s global population too.
This is part of my intro paragraph. It is a persuasive essay and I need a conclusion paragraph on the pros of adoption.
|
 
|
BrittniMarie
 |
I would love to help except its kinda hard without seeing the whole paper... usually the rule of thumb is for a conclusion paragraph to restate your introduction in different words... so by your intro maybe something like this...
As stated in the paper, there are many benefits of adoption. Not only does adoption reduce the world's global population, but provides many benefits for the adoptive children and their family. These benefits allow the child to have a replenished and more sucessful life.
Hope that helps a little and good luck! |
|
Mei-Ling
 |
But the pros of adoption are so boring!
- couple who can't conceive can just adopt
- child gains a new set of parents
- child gains a hopefully loving home
- "saves" a child from abortion (even though it has nothing to do with the aftermath of adoption, I thought I'd stick it out here)
- allows a woman to become a parent
That's about it. Look, I just summed up all your research for you in five points! That's so BORING. =)
Look for another issue you can actually expand on. Maybe like... oh, child trafficking? Or an infant's subconscious when Mommy is separated from him EVEN because of abuse/neglected? Or how the industry seeks to supply the demand?
Oh wait. That WOULD involve research and taking off the rose-tinted glasses. My bad. |
|
tish_part deux
|
um...this conclusion is truly a "logical fallacy" (there's a phrase you should look up).
ps...we can't help you write your paper. that's called "plagiarism" (another word you might wish to look up). |
|
sunny
|
"By adopting a child, it will help replenish a child’s life"
NOT ALWAYS. And they will LOSE as well. Family, culture, history, etc.
"as well as provide a child for a couple who are unable to produce offspring."
TRUE. But adoption should be about finding homes for children, not supplying infertile people with children--kids don't need jobs.
"Adoption cannot only do that, but can also cut down on the world’s global population too."
WRONG. Read this:
http://www.foreignpolicy.com/story/cms.php?story_id=4508&page=0
Get a new thesis. Your essay would be a lot more interesting, too. The politically-incorrect, Kool-aid free version of adoption might open some eyes. |
|
myst1998
 |
Wow, you need to do some research into adoption as everything you have got is just generalisations and poor logic. Adoption does not help replenish a child's life, should not be about reducing the population and should NEVER be about providing a child for infertile couples, thus all you have provided are actually cons. |
|
Helena B
|
replenish a kids life? that is a lie. You should do a ppr on the cons. way more cons than pros. |
|
SJM
|
How does it cut down on the world's global population? If women produce 'unwanted' children knowing they can send them elsewhere to receive care, isn't that promoting reproduction at a higher rate than that which might occur if they were required to take responsibility for each child they produced? |
|
sam22254
|
I see alot about both pros and non pros.
The first pro- Is either taken a child out of foster care that deserves a family
2nd - Taking a child out of love and were the birth family doesn't want the child
There is so much more you could right like How the adoption agencies and some adoption couples want a new born child and go through the action of even stealing children. Look under father;s fighting to have their children after birth mother put the child up for adoption it's happening all over. It's sad |
|
Theresa
|
Oh don't listen to these people who don't want to help you with your paper.
Here you go:
"So to conclude, adoption is a win-win situation for lawyers and the adoption industry. The US can continue to grant millions of taxpayer dollars to nonprofit adoption agencies, so that the CEO's can maintain their high standard of living and beach homes in the Hamptons. Lawyers can pay off the loans on their 2009 Cadiliac SUV's in record time, allowing them to buy the 2010 model as soon as it comes out. The mothers of adoption loss and adoptees will keep the economy fueled with payments for therapy and search and reunion services. Helping to keep those who profit off adoption in the top 5% income bracket is great for the American economy." |
|
maybe
|
Your intro paragraph reads like a piece of fiction. |
|
|
|
|
|
 Questions about adopting kids....? |
ok so i have a few questions about adoption.
1. Can you adopt kids from anywhere in the world, and can you pick what kid you want (i know that kind of sounds harsh about picking a certain kid ... |
|
 Step parent Adoption in NJ when one parent is deceased? |
| My children's father passed away a few months ago (my ex husband). My husband now would like to adopt them. Does anyone know if this is an easy thing or would my kids grandparents have to be ... |
|
 Adoptive Parents: We learn that we need to celebrate our adopted children's differences, but do you also...? |
acknowledge the ways they are similar to you? And similar to their adopted siblings.
My daughter's personality is VERY different from mine. She is independant (I didn't get me ... |
|
| I am really perplexed. Why do people say "We tried adopting in this country but it fell through" ....? |
....when there are over 150,000 children needing homes THIS MINUTE in this country, waiting in fostercare.
And the cost of adoption is almost FREE .....
I know some write that they ... |
|
 My friend gave up two twin girls for adoption 14 yrs ago they found her and have been begging since? |
| they talk about her choice to give them up, as she was young and going through a divorce from the father who was also young, but now they have found her and have continued to beg and borrow money one ... |
|
| Can My partner Adopt my 2 year old Son? |
| Is it legal for my de facto partner to adopt my son? Would we have to marry. Technically there isnt a biological father yet, as dna testing needs to be done. Im just scared that when the testing ... |
|
 Can someone tell me...? |
| What are U.S. adoption processes like compared to transracial ones?... |
|
 Muslim family adopting an Chinese orphan? |
Inspired by the good natured acts of others, I would like a little sister from China.
However, all the sites I have checked out say that only Christian families may participate. :(
My dad ... |
|
 How do i become anorexic? |
| how do i get the will power not to eat?... |
|
 My foster parents....? |
| treat me like dirt.when i need something like female items they get upset with me like if my fault what my body goes through.and they tell me they wish they had never adopted me and calls me a ... |
|
 Adoption, temporary custody, please help.? |
| Okay. My situation at home has only gotten worse. My family and I are completely living off welfare and the kindness of my grandparents and my mother's boyfriend. My mother cannot work because ... |
|
 How many other adoptees are in rocky reunions? |
| And how long do you hang in there for? I've tried, but there is nothing there. We have nothing in common and because of that I think I'm just hurting her. N (my bio mom) really wants to be ... |
|
 I want my husband to adopt my children. Their father will not relinquish his rights.? |
| My ex does not pay child support, and now that he doesn't have a car, i have to take the kids and pick them up to see him. I dont know how or what I ca do to take legal action. Is there any way ... |
|
 Can anyone help with adoption research for a novel? |
| Hi, I'm currently trying to write a novel, (written about 30,000 words so far) and much of it is based on fostering/adoption. Whilst this is not the main story, it is integral to it, and I am ... |
|
 How to adopt from the Foster Care System? |
I am looking for resources such as websites, phone numbers, etc as to how my husband and I can pursue adopting from the Foster Care System.
We live in WI but does anybody know if ... |
|
 Foster to adopt AP's? |
| Hi. Our foster child is coming up for his TPR hearing this month. Our family wants to be there, but we are NOT allowing that because of the history and background of our child, his half-sibling, and ... |
|
 He went back out with me what should i do? |
| I broke up with my boyfriend because he said in the future when we got married and it turned out i could not have kids that he would not adopt. I asked him time after time if he would ever consider ... |
|
 Have you read the book Ithaka: A Daughter's Memoir of Being Found by Sarah Saffian? |
| I have to write a book review over Ithaka: A Daughter's Memoir of Being Found by Sarah Saffian. I don't have time to finish it. So can anyone tell me the details of what happens in the end. ... |
|
| Is there any international adoption agencies that work with older parents? |
| On every site I look the age limits are different for Kazakhstan! And I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions on agencies.... |
|
|
No Spam
Adult 
Gambling
Unfinished
Deception
Plagiarism
Not English
