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First ... i think its a lovely heart felt poem. Written with much emotion and pain. I'm sorry!
If you actually gave this to your wife, you need to understand that there may be many emotions running through her and the effect might not have been positive. Was this something you would have said or given to her before she decided to leave? Would the words come naturally from your lips or would they sound rehearsed and without passion?
Don't get me wrong ... It makes me a bit sad to read your words. But in my head I read them with pain and passion ... she might not.
Its difficult to understand or accept that someone we love was unhappy enough to leave us. What you need to work on is accepting that she did leave and perhaps trying to figure out why.
Since you have a daughter together it will be very important that the two of you try to get along. Its also important that you continue to live your life and be happy. Maybe with time you will be better understand. Never think yourself completely faultless, because that is never the case. Search in ward and you just might find out some of the answers.
Best of luck ... |
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natalie
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idk |
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JAZY
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REALLY REALL Y BAD |
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crystal
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She doesnt deserve you,she is a glorified slu*.You sound such a genuine caring romantic guy and didnt deserve to be treated in such a dispicable way.You have got to move on.she is not worthy of your love. |
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firecrackerred769
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First... I have seen this poem before somewhere... where I dont know but it was all familiar... and second... obviously if I cheated on him.. so if my husband wrote this to me I would definatly be convicted... but If I was able to cheat then how were my feelings for him anyway? Of coarse it would make me take a step back and look at what I have done and hopefully strive to be a better person. I would prob. cry... but it was my own actions that caused this. |
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Angel sent from heaven
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I for one love the poem and if it were sent to me.I'd start crying because its so wonderful.its sounds like you have a nack for writeing poem's.keep up the good work.because i wish i was the one getting that poem that you wrote. |
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Ambsz
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I would feel sad and happy at the same time. I think it's a wonderful poem. |
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gothbabe14
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i would be a lil shocked it sounds like he really wants u back |
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TinkerBell
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I would cry........ alot |
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Chew on this!
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It's a very loving poem full of pain and sorrow. However, depending on the woman reading it, it will either move her to returning to you or send her into a fit of laughter. Reality is difficult sometimes, for sure.
Get into a divorce therapy group. |
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Vio Prince
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girls only love shakespeare |
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dsd
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Its very touching. Sorry for your lost or is it her lost. You need to move on. |
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chevy
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sad bacause i have screwed something up for him to feel like he does. |
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sassychick
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dude its sweet but a little scary too....u need to move on!!!Thats not good for u man.....to cling to something u don't have anymore.....let go!!!!(it's called moving on) |
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kenfitameen
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did she stay awake for that long dude?????? |
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♥Miss X♥
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man that hurts!! i know exactly how you feel..... i'm sorry if this happened to you cause it did happen to me. i hope that person realizes what they've done wrong and i hope that they can give you the closure you need. god bless |
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scabs32
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Pack my bags, because it's clearly a goodbye. |
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imNangel270
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This is a very good poem. I can feel your pain. But, I'd say you have to move on, you can't keep loving someone who doesn't love you back. She hurt you, if she truly loved you, she wouldn't have cheated. |
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$horthy!
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touching.... really nice poem |
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BlondeBooBoo
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Um...I am not a big fan of the rhyming, but it sounds like this woman didn't deserve you to begin with and you need to move on. I know that it is hard to imagine loving someone like that again, but what is life but a little trial and error? You should send it to her, but be sure you end it with a more direct line like "I am through with you and I deserve better!" |
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Taffi
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Well, obviously the guy is spineless. He's been cheated on, yet still pines for the woman. If I were the woman, and I were completely ready to move on, I'd just ignore the poem. To acknowledge it or to give him a forum to expand on it would simply drag things out and create more drama. |
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chocolatepie86
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that was a deep poem. it was sweet tho. |
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♥Sunflower
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Wow that is a pretty strong poem. I had to read it about 3 times it was just so neat. I don't really know how I would react. I would say that gal did not know what she really had. |
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lover143
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i would have cried. your a lucky girl to have someone love you so much but it seema that you lost out on that wonderful man. That's a very sweet poem i think. i love it it's very good. I wish you the best of luck with the feelingsyou are having. don't listen to others because you are the only one who feels that pain. |
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dark_storm73
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It depends on which person I would be... the one reading it (written for me) or the one writing it (the person done wrong). The first thing I would feel was I the "bride" would be guilt, remorse, sorrow and then anger. However, there are many things that the writer may have missed, so if there was more to the story, say another side, then I may feel differently. The anger, however, would come from the vengeful connotations at the end.
Were I the author or "the groom" then I can't say that I would wish vengeance such as stated at the end, but it denotes a hopelessness that is so sad. It also shows a negative twist. To hope that one isn't happy is veagence in its essence. I would think asking what went wrong would be a better choice or what would it take for "the bride" to come home. It also denotes a resentment and "not letting go" and that's normal at first, but if it continues, then it's unhealthy and should be dealt with. We can't always forget betrayals, but we can forgive and let things go. As long as we're alive, there's always tomorrow-- a chance to right the wrongs, forgive sins (of ourselves AND others), a chance to change, and a chance to turn the corner and find something better than what we lost.
Sometimes, loss is the best gift you can have. Had I not "lost" my first marriage, I never would have had this glimpse of love that I had in the second. Things have not always gone right, but its something I would do again, even if I knew I was going to lose it tomorrow because it was/is just that kind of love. Don't worry so much with the loss when you can't stop it... it may be freeing you up for someone who is ready for you and waiting. |
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Christina
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cant really answer that because i dont know why she is leaving. why is she not hear you or why is she walking away?
if you are witing this poem after you beat me, or after you cheated on me then i wouldnt think much of it because you hurt me too. |
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todieisgain_121
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Ignore the comment from the guy. I think it's wonderful. I guess it all depends on how much she wants to save the relationship. If she doesn't want to, she may not appreciate it. If she does want to, then it will probably make her cry. If my husband wrote that to me, I'd come running to his arms. God Bless |
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totallylost
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Loved...truely loved.. for someone to pour out their heart and sould like that..loved. quilty would be next, but alot of people wouldn't because they have this "me-me" thing going on. I am not sure of what you asking for, did your husband write you this poem...if so girl, you messed up big time, he loves you...he would take you back. I don't know what kind of a person he is, because he could be the meanest man on earth, but can write lovely poems. So, I am not sure what to say, but first reaction is loved....God bless... |
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Kaylee Noelle
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i would feel kinda bad for what i had done, unless it wasn't true that i had left him, then i would be really confused... |
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Jane M R
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That would depend on what kind of man wrote it. |
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